I highly enjoy this.
I've been away for the past month [thus unable to review]...
But I really enjoy this fanfic.
Please update soon!

I'd spell it 'p-r-o-l-o-g-e'

in chapter 3 not including the prologue(or chapter 4 if u do) u said it was a lunch incedint when in the previous chapter u said it happened at dinner
just pointing that out but other than that great story keep writing
i ave really no idea wats with the chapter title ?orange?

love this story! poor Matt though.. i'm looking forward to the expansion of their friendship! can't wait for the next chapter. =)

THIS FANFIC..IS AMAZING...I LOVE IT...AS FOR WHY THE 4TH CHAPTER IS CALLED ORANGE...?? NO IDEA...MAYBE CUZ...IT SHOWS HOW MELLO LIKES CHOCOLATE SO MUCH AND HOW HED PROLLY NEVER EAT AN ORANGE? HAHAHA IDK. GREAT FANFIC...CNT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE

HAHA.
“Just play your damn video games.”
I laughed so hard at that.
I'm not quite sure why.
It just pretty much sums up their entire relationship.
XD

Update soon.
Like NOW kind of soon.
XD

First of all, I love this chapter.
Secondly, I think it is named 'Orange' for Matts goggles or the color of Matt and Mellos hair. (Don't ask)
Thirdly, Mello was born on Dec. 13, 1989.
And Matt was born on Feb. 1, 1990.
Well, please tell me if I am any where near what you had in mind for the chapter name.

Luv it please continue and if you can make the chapers a little longer and more developed

yup i can defeatnally feel the guilt& kinda short chapter too but can't wait for the next one!

Oh Mells.

How sweet, remorse. Nice ending...Very...straight to the point. XD

I really like this a lot!

:D
I'm not sure how I pull it off either... =/
Inside jokes, inside jokes. Good times.
-cringes from images you've put in my head-

I like this a lot. Poor Mattie! D:

All I could think of was chocolate cake with sprinkles. M cake... If it was chocolate Mello would like it... Anyways... Moving on from my cake filled fantasy, I wanna say stop torturing Matt, coz we love him, but now Mello gets to kiss and make it better :) You win some you lose some. Please update soon! x

I like your story so far. I hope you update soon! xD

Poor Matt, I feel his embarrasment.

Will the future chapters switch between Matt and Mello's point of view?
It would be interesting to see things from both their sides.

Keep up the AWESOME work!

-Actress0707

i realy like your story,i'ts pretty cute.i hope for more updates soon.