I like this please continue soon

Aww Zidaine and Dagger.
OMG, how adorable are they!

Lol, gotta love Blank. "I think you like him..." Hmm, they're all so cute when they arn't being all serious. And then he's being all "Well you can't hear the joke Zidaine." How cute. :D

OKAY, poor Dagger, she's being tickled. :( That is not a fun experience, I WOULD KNOW, lol, and then Quina joins in on their little fun fest and that's all creepy, cause that thing scares me. O.o

I FEEL BAD FOR STEINER. Just within that little moment, it's ilke he sounds lonely, and he thinks Beatrix will nevver love him, BUT SHE TOTALLY DOES, oh my god, I lied, don't kill him, ahve them like get together and get married. :( Steiner deserved a hug right there! :(

Anyways, since I tend to ramble about how cute and how much I pity these individuals, i'll wrap things up and just say that I adore this lovely, lovely story. Beautiful writing, a great mood, cute setting, love the characters, FANTASTIC WORK! update soon?

rolliepollie44

Oh, that's depressing.
Poor Vivi and Zidaine, that would be upsetting, everything they knew was just like torn away from them and now they're stuck dealing with the atermath. At lest the others are understanding. ^.^

Hrm, I really, really love Dagger. She's so adorable, her and Zidaine. :D I love how he's just watching her leave. :P AWW SO CUTE!

I sure hope Zidaine feels better. I love how as far as I can tell, he's still very in character despite he isn't all cocky and what not. Very nice work with that. :D

I love the scene between Freya and Zidaine, you could really picture what was giong on, and I of course, adored the scene between Zidaine and Dagger, everything was very picture-able, I loved the emotion and the descriptions, gorgeous story darlin, can't wait for an UPDATE! :)

rolliepolliee

Are you kidding? I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Its filled with deep thoughts and lots of things sometimes we think about. lol. Why are we here? Are we the only ones here? Do we even exist?

Good job! update soonish! Don't worry, just do you're thing and when your back, I'm sure you'll have new ideas for this story! :)

poor Zidane he's troubled I'm relly enjoying the story.

Hey! I just began to read your story, and I must say, the concept is really intreaguing!! I'm so looking forward to see how it goes.
If there had to be anything to complain about (and it's a tiny, tiny complaint), it's that the language is a bit lacking some places. Would happily beta it, if I weren't much worse than you. 8D Just though I'd mention it.

Keep up the good work! *runs off to read more*

Oh my gosh! Kuja is SCARY.
Even his little minion guy sounds just absoloutly terrified to be anywhere near him.
Who wouldn't be?!?

Aw, poor Zidaine and Vivi.
Yay for Dagger! She's so adorable!
PFFT who wouldn't want them to join!
Lol, and I rather enjoy Regent Cid, he's... unique. :D:D

Anywho, I love how the plot is pulling together, this chapter really just sparked everything, Kuja's in, Dagger invited Vivi and Zidaine, it'll be interesting to see where you go with this. :)

I love how you desribe Blank, he just sounds like the coolest person and the best guy EVER. And he actually has like, a brain, and an opinion, and thoughts. Lol, I just really love him!

Lovely job, you really do a grand job with developing the charcaters and keeping the chapter really together and not random. :) I CANNOT wait to read more! Fantastic work. :D:D

rolliepollie44

yay frist description of Kuja. Seriously enjoying the story!

I like this chapter! Its well written. OMG! I hope they do join! :)


I hope the story doesn't make a twist and say that Zidane has only dreamed this whole thing. It'll confuse me so much.. xD

anyways, good job! if it ends up like that, its okay, I was just joking. update soonish!

-Alexa xD

Yay Freya's here (that means the other's aren't far behind lol) Can't wait for the next update =D

I think of Quina as a boy. Still reading the story and reveiwing like I said. Enjoying every word of this story by the way. :)

wow I'm really enjoying this story ^^ Keep up the good work =D

wow I was at the edge of my really really really uncomfortable chair, just dieing to read more (quickly). You did an excelent job on this chapter, it was like I could feel the tenson while tension for reading more was building up inside me if that makes any sence. Well I gonna keep reading as soon as I stop typing. (Guess I get used to typing quickly lol okay stop - now)

I'm really enjoying this ^^. Wow I've reveiwed alot (also running out of things to say about each chapter as there all so cool!) Never the less I will continue to read.

(I'm doing alot of reveiwing today - hope you don't mind). Poor Zidane, having no clue what's going on.
On to reading the next interesting chapter...