NO! IT"S A CLIFFIE!


TT^TT YOu are so cruel! TT^TT

But i must say I LOvE THIS STORY! even if you are picking on DUO just a little bit ^-^

Keep up the good work ^-^ Hope to see an update soon >.> ^-^

God, I love this story. More, more, more! Please!

I love this story-- Poor Duo TT-TT I was once stuck in a cave for hours, so I know just how bad he must of felt sitting on his lonsom...

That's alright he is now with the other's again, and I am hoping to see Chapter three very shortly ^-^ Yay for stories that one cannot stop writing ^-^

Thanks for such a good story so far and I can't wait to see what is going on with our much loved bishi's!

Kinda creepy. I've never been big on tunnels, narrow places or underground caves. I always identified with Legolas in LoTR, not liking the whole "dark, creepy tunnel" thing. Caves are for dwarves...and Balrogs.
ANYHOW, nice job of freaking Duo out. And us! I'm hoping the help they think will come eventually gets there. Preferably before the monster ghost fish eat them...or they have to eat each other. That'd be too gross for words. You'll warn us if it's going to come to that, right? Cuz I, for one, would bail out right then!

Oh my gosh update update update! Well written, not overly prosy. very down to earth, i like it. I love supernatural stuff, I can't wait to find out the significance of the drawings. So exciting!