YOU BITCH! Okay, I don't mean that... But I curse when I start crying.. YOU MADE ME CRY! This hit so close to home. My dad fell off a biulding (okay, he was a stunt man so he was being payed to do it) and missed his target. He was in a coma and went into Repatory Falure... And I swear I had a dream like that. (PS don't put it in bold unless you want a dead giveaway, that's the only critisim I have so far.) You make it so lifelike that I was sobbing. So yes your a bitch you made me cry, but it's amazing that you can write such emotional pieces that bring readers to tears.

I really enjoyed this story, you had me crying and laughing, what a wonderful way for it to end and then especially with the outtake *fans self* WOW!

I loved this story it was sweet and sad. I just couldn't believe Riley ugh what a douche. I'm so glad the boys found their back in the end no matter what obstacles were in the way they got their HEA! I love it :-)

This isn't a flame. Just you should indent every time someone starts talking. It just looks like the words are mashed together.

But great story btw:)

Jasper's a wicked little devil, isn't he! ROTFLMAO!

No, it wasn't a dream...it was a bloody nightmare! Thank goodness.

Hello

that was a very hot chapter..

I love your story. it was awesome.. sadder then hell. but the ending was beautiful.. :)Leona

Great story. Wow there were tons of unexpected twists. Thanks

Wow, I can't see why you do not like the chapter. I thought it was beautiful. I hope they heal in the tropics. Can Rylie die in jail please. Meg

Well the beating was much worse than I expected. Wow.

Oh dear. I would not want to be on the wrong side of Edwards anger.

Wow wonderful start. Intense is right.

damn that was some trick you had me in tears. I don't care if it was a trick! He's ALIIIIIIIIIVE! :'D

OMG I hate you right now! I really thought you had killed Jasper. Good thing that I thought it was too early for him to be dead, otherwise I would have stopped reading. I hate sad endings, please tell me you have a happily ever after here? :D

I'm in floods of tears writing this I'm gonna kill u I thought he was seriously dead! I can't stop crying :'(