i love it! i loved all of it espcially the way harry acted when sev got his son back! genious i say!

really good please update soon. :)

This was a fun and entertaining story, though the constant switching between PoVs was a little irritating. I like the character/pet you created, Honey, and hope she will be in future stories.

AMAZING! I LOVE Honey!:) Great story!
~Rushingriver

Really excellent. It has the feel of a swift wind, carrying relationships and a newfound understanding with it.

This was a great story! I loved it a lot. I love your Severus and Harry. Fantastic job, thank you.

I have read this story a long time ago..this story is one of my all time favorites! I am glad that Severus and Harry are going to become a family!

This is one awesome story. I am sorry I did not review earler. But I am hook. You are a awesome writer.

Coolios! I loved the direct approach of this story!:D

That was great. Update soon.

Great.

you so skiped, like, a year!

wonderful, I really would love to read more if you get the chance to add more to this story.

Wow, this is the first time that I have ever read a story that is written completely from different points of view. You have done extremely well. Most point of views that I read, usually seem to be missing something, or exactly opposite, are so lengthy and confusing that you can't understand them. However you have made your whole story so far out of the inner most thoughts, feelings, and views of your characters, and yet it is completely wonderful. There is so much content and detail and it still keeps me interested and thinking "what's next?" So far the only thing I would change is the huge gap that is left between the time Severus retreives Harry, and the time he and his friends recieve their results at the end of the year. You don't have to put a lot of detail. Just maybe some instances of ways that Sev and Harry have been towards each other. (whether they have been civil, or tolerable/intolerable, or just ignored each other). I can't wait to keep reading. I've noticed the story is some what short. I do hope there is a sequal or if not that you will someday write one. Thanks for the wonderful chapters so far!

it's very different from the canon, but a nice story nonetheless