 Gondegoogoo 4/1/09 . chapter 10Coolios! I loved the direct approach of this story!:D |
 Rori Potter 3/11/09 . chapter 10That was great. Update soon. |
 Rori Potter 3/11/09 . chapter 1Great. |
 hypercell 1/12/09 . chapter 1you so skiped, like, a year! |
 browniydgal 11/17/08 . chapter 10wonderful, I really would love to read more if you get the chance to add more to this story. |
 browniydgal 11/17/08 . chapter 3Wow, this is the first time that I have ever read a story that is written completely from different points of view. You have done extremely well. Most point of views that I read, usually seem to be missing something, or exactly opposite, are so lengthy and confusing that you can't understand them. However you have made your whole story so far out of the inner most thoughts, feelings, and views of your characters, and yet it is completely wonderful. There is so much content and detail and it still keeps me interested and thinking "what's next?" So far the only thing I would change is the huge gap that is left between the time Severus retreives Harry, and the time he and his friends recieve their results at the end of the year. You don't have to put a lot of detail. Just maybe some instances of ways that Sev and Harry have been towards each other. (whether they have been civil, or tolerable/intolerable, or just ignored each other). I can't wait to keep reading. I've noticed the story is some what short. I do hope there is a sequal or if not that you will someday write one. Thanks for the wonderful chapters so far! |
 maggie2mw 11/7/08 . chapter 10it's very different from the canon, but a nice story nonetheless |
 SemperSomnium 10/31/08 . chapter 10Awesome fic! It was so cute! I loved it. Sev and Harry's relationship was really cute and the family ties well thought out. Thanks for sharing! |
 CrayonsPink 8/21/08 . chapter 10This is a brillant story! Loved it! |
 Sedesapientia 8/19/08 . chapter 10This is one of the best stories I've ever read,I loved every part of it. |
 Sedesapientia 8/19/08 . chapter 5I love this story,so sweet and kinda sad too. |
 Sedesapientia 8/19/08 . chapter 1Wonderful writing,I like the two points of veiw and i really enjoy reading about a snarky Severus Snape(I don't think I would enjoy meeting him though,LOL) |
 hayylies 7/15/08 . chapter 3wow, a dressed-down snape! |
 Katalara 7/6/08 . chapter 10Great Story! I really loved it.
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 tashriia 6/19/08 . chapter 3You have a good writing style, and I like the way the story is progressing. |