Wow! this is a very good start. looks like it will be a great story. *imagining Snape in black muggle clothes w/a pony tail* *drools* yum!

Please keep writing I am going to go crazy. This chapter wasn't boring at all. I enjoyed it. Please keep it up.

O.o...Snapes actually somewhat human? Wow, who knew. Good story so far.

hiya

this is a good beginning write more!

if youi r intreste in the possibiolities of Snape havuing harry stay with him then u might want to check out my fic, SnapeSummer.

so anyway keep writing, looking forward to more!

it shouls be a harry and snape slash it has the makings of one and i think it would be great! you don't have anything against harry/snape do you?

That was quite good, and I do relize you have a veiw of how snape is and how he talks, but he seemed a bit ot of charactor to me, and I do relize you have your own way of writing, but the way he seemed to be thinking was a ooc seeminly to me too. I must say, good plot, but maybe could you add the prolouguo (sp? ) where Snape comes and gets Harry the summer before, that may spicen things up and add exctiment, but maybe not.

Oh...Like it lots... Till the next.

Licca, how could you say this was boring? Don't be so hard on yourself! Although, I would very much enjoy another chapter..hehe. You have an excellent introduction here, and have certainly gotten my curiosity up. There are simply too few non-slash Snape/Harry stories out there...

This is really good! I'm begging you though, please please please don't make it slash! I love the one oh shit there's a fucking mountaintop part. I started to crack up! Please do more soon!

I puttin it on my fav's list, write more soon

I most certainly do not find it boring. Just the other way around, I think it very enjoyable and dramatic. Am certainly looking forward to more.

hurry and write more

Great idea and a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting story. Keep on writing.:)