Damn, that was really actually romantic.. and possessive.. What is it with aristocrats that tend to be possessive with their woman that I find romantic? Feminists would blow their tops, but heck, it's just so 'something'.. XD

Bwahahaha i luv it!xd

LOVED IT! Beautifully written!

Aww. :( Poor Neji.

He's getting some alright ... but not everything.

I especially like NejiHina with these kinds of adversities in Neji's path - Naruto, mainly, and Hinata's affections for other people besides him. It's like, she loves him dearly, but not in the way he would crave. That torture is something I'd like to see him condemned with after nearly killing her. But of course that's only if it's a NejiHina fanfiction ... or not! 8D Naruto has so much potential to be a raging soap opera

good job. :)

I wish she was his too.

God, and was she supposed to still be in love with Naruto?
Poor (?) Neji xD
Well, despite of what he thinks, I think every inch is already his, her body, that is o.o
Good work :)

This is sexy because it, it is not just about the sex. It's about the emotions and need that drive that. It is about the details of the hands and the glances and the words. Very, very good.

nice oneshot. hope you write a sequel.

Love it! It flowed really nicely, and you really brought out the emotion in it. I particularly liked the way you used the line "the words behind the words" repeatedly. It really enforced the emotion, you know? This was really good, and I enjoyed reading it. Great work!

Peace Out! _

This is just sweet. ;;

Honestly, this is very slick, I love 'every inch' of this story. Moving. :)xx

Wow...*nose bleeds*

Really good...esp at how smexy Neji is, its no doubt Hinata is much besotted with him. Who wouldn't?

I always like how emotionally deep NejiHina as a pairing compared to other pairings and definitely love the possessive side of Neji. That's just so Neji alright!

Great job with this one-shot! More NejiHina in the future!

aw nejis so sweet!

Honestly? I want to indulge more into this particular universe. Any thoughts of doing another story, perhaps a sequel?

Because this was a bloody good read.

Ah... Awesome. *blushing*

I really liked your story.

Poor Neji... Loving someone that doesn't love you back is probably the worst thing that can happen to you.

Nice writing.