 Dark Night Fairy 2009-09-21 . chapter 5 Mah...
Don't forget to up-date, kay? |
 Day Light Fairy 2009-09-21 . chapter 4 This is awesome!
I love Akira!
Where was Tokito? |
 Day Light Fairy 2009-09-21 . chapter 3 Yummy!
Poor Tora and Kyo...
Hihihihihihi... |
 Dark Night Fairy 2009-09-21 . chapter 2 I'm not fond of Yaoi but I'll still support this story
Don't give up |
 Day Light Fairy 2009-09-21 . chapter 1 Kya~
Good start! |
 MicheleKuchiki 2009-07-19 . chapter 5Wishin there was a little more YuyaxKyo but it was really great! I hope you update real soon! I'm in love with this story! |
 Maya-chan2007 2009-07-14 . chapter 5I really liked this chapter, even if it was 'just a bunch of flashbacks'. They really helped to put a perspective on the people, and helped us see how it was that everyone (except Yuya, for obvious reasons) met. Poor Sasuke, living in an orphanage. I really liked when you used the "Yuya's prayer to the cleaning God" bit, that was so funny! I hope you can find your inspiration for this story again. |
 v.see.v 2009-07-13 . chapter 5Hey...what is this all about?
You wrote: If you were a smart person and ignored this whole thing
I didn't ignore it...i read...does that mean i'm not smart?..:( i'm insulted *turns around* i'm ignoring you and i am completely insulted *looking at wall* hel this is boring *turns around*...fine...i'm done being insulted. :P :) moving on lol i must be a genius because i read since i'm not smart lol :P Yes i am in a weird mood right now and your math got to my head and now i will review :) hehe okay so yuya's cleaning was super funny and one of a kind. it was weird but when i thought about it i could totally see her doing it. Tora's drunken state made me drunk and get a headache...sorry but true. it must have been crazy writing that. stick with it girl and i think kyo and yuya have to rip each others heads off more...thats what they live for. :) a very information chapter and i can't wait for more. run around your room 23 times if you get writers block and say,"i will not eat cheese and say bubba. i will not eat cheese and say bubba." lol :) it works or it puts you in a fit of laughter lol :P i'm weird :) keep it up and you will succeed. Ciao! |
 Maya-chan2007 2009-07-10 . chapter 4I love your story! It's so awesome, and full of SDK cheer! Which, you know, equals insults, bloody violence, and cross-dressing. Sort of. Anyways, you were wanting to know about Akari's personality; basically, she/he absolutely loves Kyo, and would do practically anything for him. That, or make one of the other Shiseiten do it for her/him. She/he is a shaman, and uses her/his powers to heal others, but only if they tell her/him a secret first. She/he then lords said secret over the others to make them do what she/he wants them to do. Akari also has long pink hair and keeps insisting that she/he is a girl; she/he also has a bet going with Kyo that if Akari can hit/scratch his face, then Kyo will marry Akari. The rest of the Shiseiten view Akari as 'the worst', when Akari insists that he/she is the best. That's about a basic summary of Akari's personality, but if you need more, PM me or something and I will tell you more. Great story, by the way, and I love how practically everyone you meet is in a gang. What gang do Antera and Bikara belong to? And why does Tora call Yukimura An-san instead of by his name-san? |
 eiriloeshuichi 2009-07-05 . chapter 4 Can not wait for the next one. |
 insane-dumbass 2009-07-04 . chapter 4wah nice chapter!! loll baka-tora's nice :P
And i like the way Kyo wrote that note, soo funny (not for Yuya though xD) |
 v.see.v 2009-07-04 . chapter 4LMAO! The ending was fantabulous! hahaha :) again i really really like. you go into a lot of story which is really good and sometimes it drags but it always comes together and i really don't care because its well worth it. you know me, so you know i'll keep reading :) oh and your question about Akari...just think queen bee...preppy queen bee...preppy, miss perfect, do what i say or i'm going to kill you, and i only respond to beautiful or just when kyo talks to me queen bee...yep i think that sums her...i mean him up. and yes she acts like a girl but she gets all oh stop joking silly when everyone talks about her being a he. Akari is one of a kind. She beats up all of the Shiseiten except her true love...kyo :) you'll like her a lot when u finall read her. Ciao again! |
 rannettia 2009-06-29 . chapter 3 love the story!, Pleases update soon. |
 MicheleKuchiki 2009-06-29 . chapter 3I'm in love with this story. Please. please write more! You've got everyone's personalities down! i just love it! please continue! |
 iWantToHateHim 2009-06-28 . chapter 3I really like the story so far! But why make yuya out to be ugly? Really I thought in the manga she was the most beautiful...*shrugs* |