And a long day it was. That's a wonderful take on how Jack must have felt. I didn't think too deeply into it, but that was perfect.

Wow, that was brilliant. The ending just completely brought back the feeling of watching the Season 1 finale.

Fantastic. I love reading this story (especially after the parody). That last line is fantastic.

I like the chapter names by the way.
The last paragraph of this is so wonderful and heartbreaking . . . OK, it all is, but especially that paragraph. Especially this sentence.
"Four shots to save my family, but also four shots that I will never forgive myself for."

Do you EVER stop?
I love the idea, very clever, and I can't wait to read more. Onwards I go.