Good story methinks. Got an idea for a character. His names Private Liam Redmond, a Scot formerly of the 45 Commandos and he specialises as a sniper. Still enjoying the story much.

I have a character :
Private 1st Class Dalton "DD" Devlin.
Your grammar is pretty sub-par, but I like the story. Try to improve.

Nice I like how's it going and for a character liek you said you're accepting he can be a Corporal, or Private First Class...name, Jake Matiks.

The first chapter was quite good but this chapter was a huge downgrade... The last part was extremely rushed, I'd draw that out like 5 times more.

Looks good! I really hate to see Gaz died He's an awesome character with proper British accent. Cpt.Price...eh well.. He died many times before...I mean like; there's Price in 1943 He died aboard enemy's ship and there's Price again...in 1944 and now in 2012..I don't see why he's not gonna survive this one..he's immortal lol.

Awesome. Gaz should've been alive; he's such a kickass character.