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Reviews for: The Nightmare of Their Parallel Journeys
Mystic Spirit Angel
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
Liked it? LIKED IT!? OMG I LOVED IT! *faints from overjoy...then wakes back up* I'm ok!

But O...M...G...This was beyond cute, mystifying, romantic, and a whole bunch of other words my brain is failing to remember! X3 I LOVE IT! You should do more XD Oh by the way, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU *goes on for several minutes*

Ok now to take on a more serious tone now that I've gotten the whole spaz thing out of the way ^^;

Wow, in my opinion, you really kept Jack and Amelia well in character! You really conveyed the inner torment that Amelia goes through whenever her thoughts go back to her feelings about Jack, or in this case, a strange dream which further revealed her feelings.

As for Jack, *applauds* well played! He's definitely confused and that's how I would have pictured it lol!

I loved the small humor you put in with Amelia's parents, especially her dad XD

Over all, you did a fabulous job! You certainly have a nack for fully expressing powerful emotion! Thank you again so much!

-Mystic Spirit Angel
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