Brilliant! I really liked it!

I thought this was quite interesting, and I liked it very much. Especially how you made it seem real, but when she was really dreaming. Very clever, but be careful with dream stuff, as it is so cliched now.

Wow
It almost made me cry at the end! lol
(Thats a good thing lol. Barely anything makes me cry :P)

Loved it!! :D

Wow. Cool. Good.