OmyGod I personally am scared for Hiei's life! What are they gonna do to him?! I already hate the bad guy! Anyway I'm love your story keep up the awesome work! I can't wait!

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lemonrocker

i love your story. VERY creative. keep writing please! =3

Oh Confrantation. How scary! Can't wait! You did a great job on this chappie.

lemonrocker

your story was awesome! nicely described without to much detail, killer plot, it was GOOD. keep writing! :3

Oh my god omgod omygod what the hell that was not what I expected it was much better! God great job at this you are awesome!11

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lemonrocker

I really like this story, other authors have a tendency to make it entirely too fluffy and mushy, but you've avoided that^_^ I somewhat hope that the Black Knights captures Hiei and use him against his father, then they'd be able to clear Koray of all charges.

OH I can't wait for the next chappie. This is going to be so good. Really great chappie!

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lemonrocker

Hiei! how could they hurt him he is so cute. I would just pet him and then get lost as quicj as I can. he is so cute love your story can't wait for teh rest of it. Really good


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lemonrocker