I really loved this, giving so much personality to such an obscure character (well, not anymore). Really great!

I really like this story! Especially since you focused on a girl that was merely mentioned in the musical. And did enjoy the Otto/Thea and the Hanschen/Ernst moments.

Very beautiful...

AA

:D The Hernst at the end made me happy. Thus the face.
I never really thought of her as bitchy, just too stuck-up for Otto with the crazy hair/extra pounds (depending on the cast), or of Otto as just having low self-esteem. But I do rather like the motherly type, too.
Now we need some Bobby Maller!

I always had a Marianna stuck in the back of my head- though mine was a bit more bitchy. XD But this was very very lovely! C: I loved the last two lines of the third-last paragraph.

This was such a nice look-in at the lives of a mentioned character! I always wondered what happened to Marianna. And now I know!

I sort of thought she'd a bitch too, but you just convinced me.

That was awesome. At first I found it just funny that someone made a Marianna Wheelan fic, then I ended up really enjoying it. I see myself in her. Great job! :D

this was a really cool story =) i kind of think of marianna as a “higher life form“ type person or at least someone who thinks she is =S hmm... anyway, very nice =)