i love love love this story. i love the fact that jasper proposed while..."busy". i also liked that they took a two week break.LOL. it tied in really well with the story, IMO. definately the best alicejasper story. ima read it again=p

Sometimes pointless fluff and smut is just what the reader needs. ;P

AW! That was sweet! And HOT!

Alice is one lucky girl (I am totally Team Edward, but MAN! I do love me some Jasper!)!!

I loved this Alice/Jasper one shot, it was so beautiful, tender, tasteful and sexy. Lovely simply lovely! Perfect!

Though Edward is still the main star of my fantasies, Jasper runs a close second. I just loved it.

Well, that's one way to propose. In fact, it's a helluva proposal! And I loved how Alice was surprised by it.

All in all, it was very sweet.

aww...that's really sweet!

Wonderful.. I can't describe it in any other way

Naughty! Naughty! ;)

i LOVED IT!
They're my Favorite couple other then Edward&Bella...
Between Edward and Jacob...I choose Edward(Duh)...but between Edward and Jazz...I SO pic Jazzie!!LOL X3

Wow...I think this was a good choice for my first smutty Twilight fic!!

I really like it too much, this is really lovely and sexy, I really like this couple, they're so great together

I simply love it. Your description is wonderful, you have respected the personality of both characters, and moreover... I'm spanish and sometimes I have difficulties to read in English, but with your shot it was like I was reading in Spanish!!
Wonderful, great!!

And so beatiful Elvis's song... =)

Real sweet story. Nice to see this aspect of the back story.

Aw man. That was beautiful, hot and very tasteful.
So Alice and Jasper.
I wish you'd write more sweet smut with them :D
They are just the cutest couple ever.