You really nailed Jessica's point of view. I liked it.

Love it! It's fantastic and complete in itself. Great point of view from Jessica. Another, please?

Fun story, great title! Please keep it going - I love your take on Jessica. Don't be afraid to try writing her POV in the first person - it may make the story even more engaging. You seem to have a pretty good feel for her inner dialog, so give it a shot! Will read with interest. Looking forward to more.

I almost feel sorry for Jessica now. Nice work.