Except for the grammar (and I don't know how much of that is just U.S vs. U.K.) this was a great chapter! And yes, custody battles get nasty everywhere (American kids don't actually get to choose where they live but after a certain age their wishes have more weight).

That was good, I liked the phone call with his siter it was a nice to see how he feels about his family and what they think of his lifestyle. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!!

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I really love this story! Will you update before Xmas?

Wow, real pleasure to read this ! I spent the evening on a very boring homework, I go wandering on the Internet and what do I find ? JUst what I needed : a new chapter of your story !Thank you ! ^^
I know I keep on repeating myself, but... I do love it ! ^^ Nice job !

I liked this very much! I love the banter between Warren and Kyle!

I can't wait for more of it!

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I loved your last two chapters, 8 and 9. You did a wonderful job of incorporating Charles and Anna in the story! Charles was included so little in that book that I was wondering what role the two of them had played behind the scenes. Thanks! :) I can't wait for the big discussion that Warren and Kyle are going to have.

I'm glad Mercy smaked him, Sam deserves it. :)
I'm so glade you updated, I can't wait for the next one! I really want to see that discusion between Kyle and Warren.

Love this, it had been amazing, Warren and Kyle are so sweet together! I havn't read the Alpha & Omega books yet, but now I really want to. I can't wait for more!

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Thanks for updating. I liked the story about the woman who loves her cat more then her husband. :) I'm glade you added Anna in. I love Anna, and I wondered where she was in the Mercy series. Keep writing!

Hi ! Sorry, I'm still catching up, I'm so late in my reading of your chapters ! But I've done it and honestly, I really like it ! I don't know what else to write, it sems pretty simple, but just that : I really like your story ! ^^ Keep going !

Omg, I love how you worked Anna in. In the books, Anna had no presence at all, which is understandable, as she didn't exist yet. But this totally makes sense. And you ended the chapter on a perfect note. Love it!

That ending was so sweet! I love Kyle and Warren. Update soon!

I compleetly agree with you. Kyle and Warren arn't in the books enough. Thanks for writing this. :)

You might want to clean up the terrible run-on sentances that make this pretty much unreadable.

I just wanted to tell you that I'm really glad you wrote this story. Thanks. =)