I love how the watch has no hands! That's so perfect for this book and Orr's character.

This was exactly right. It would fit right into the book.

I love this. The conversation was perfect-on both sides ... As was the logic. And the characterization, now that I think of it. :)

One thing to point out:

When Yossarian is looking at Orr's watch, you accidentally write "Yossarain" instead of "Yossarian" once. Other than that, I didn't see anything else wrong.

Thanks for writing,

Ashe

This was absolutely wonderful. Spot-on Orr!

Very good! As perfect as the watch.

Oh this was perfect. Orr is right on with the tittering and matter-of-fact tone. I also really enjoyed the watch without hands.