This is a very good little fiction and in my opinion worthy of more reviews, all of the favorable. Do not give up writing. You have talent.

This fiction didn't have anything I disliked. I must applaud your characterizations. I had no trouble whatsoever imagining this taking place.

Hahaha... Very cool. Nice work, hope you write some more of this pairing. Keep at it.

Well, I guess that would be the Option #2 way of how one Zaraki Kenpachi handles situations. Guess since he had already seen Hitsugaya fight on more than one occasion, I guess that this was the way to test the young man's mettle in other ways, as well as tell Toshirou in a round-about way that he thought the "kid" was not a complete waste of space when it came to his daughter. I thotoughly enjoyed reading this peice, and hope to see more from you in the future, or even more stories of this line, if you have the haert and mind to do them.

YachiruxHitsugaya...hmm never really thought about it but i think i found a new pairing lol...awsome fic and love the ending :)