This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

This story has great potential, but I would change her last name. Wasn't Owen's last name Wells? I like how you related Harmony with everybody, like she was in the story all along. Also, I think that you can't put people to sleep, you can only give them drugs and let them pass on by themselves. I don't know, maybe I'm wrong. And maybe try to make the third paragraph flow a bit better? It seems like you're jumping from subject to subject. Great story, though.

your story is amamzing, but you haven't updated in a while! please update soon!