God I really hate u, u know!

*grrr* u HAD to end the chapter in the best part!

Gosh

Pls update I FLOVE this story! Edward

I loved this story and cant wait for you to carry on.

Maybe the next chapter could be in Edwards pov ive missed him.

Please update soon.

Hello. Cute story. Wish my high school would've took field trips like that. Thanks, Suzan Noerr

Aw! These two are so sweet and I was thrilled to get a notice that you'd updated. Though this was short, it got me back in the swing and very eager for more. I hope to see more soon. Keep up the good work!

I would love to be your beta! I have never done it before but would love to! Tell me what I have to do!

Amber

very sweet

I just wish the chapters were longer and the scenes explored more.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Awesome! cant wait for the next chapter...update soon

cute

glad u r back on track w/ the story. I

Cool first chapter

I just found this story

I always read the last chapter first-loved this chapter, very sweet

great story idea.

I hope you update soon b/c I will be reading the previous chapters today

Just found this story... really great! Not sure if I like the cliff hangers... mean!

LOL

Amber

awesome

This is a fun story idea. I look forward to the longer chapters and to seeing what unfolds. It was a relief to learn that Bella is aware that the guys are not being terribly sincere and she is not just a naive pushover. I'm very curious as to what will happen as Mike and Edward talk more and to hear more from Edward's pov, for example what Alice was saying to him that first day when Bella saw them over by his car. Again, the concept is engaging and while there a few little grammar issues I am really enjoying your writing and I definitely want to read more.

Wanda

Hello. I'd say, Edward, is sitting next to her on the bus. How demeaning for him to have to ride a school bus, when he is used to his fancy ride to go everywhere in. Oh well. How nice of Charlie to worry by Bella and giving her the cell phone, and pepper spray? Let's just hope that she doesn't have to use it, the pepper spray I mean. Thanks. Suzan Noerr

um let me guess shes sitting next to edward cullen! haha lub it cant wait 4 da next chapter! :D