Cool story btw

Psst
Guess what
You should update ;)

^d8

Aww don't get PO'd, those flamers out there are just butt faces :P I, am a loyal reviewer/reader and therefore i will give you a good review :) I really do like this fanfic and i can't wait for the update and find out why Fang has suddenly lost the will to fight *dun dun dun* :) please update soon

ookk. so i like your ideas so far, but i think the writing seems distracted. you keep switching povs which can work, but i think you should go into detail maybe a little more. i really am curious to see where you go with this but maybe slow it down a little-- you sound like you have a ton of good ideas but are just spitting them out randomly. also the author notes in the middle of paragraphs are slightly distracting and annoying.
please dont get me wrong tho...i will deff. continue to read this because i think it has great potential. :)

plz plz plz PLZ write more!! that was like amazing!! i think they should b thrown into the same "cell" thing as max in The School. the real Max. then watever. idk. keep writing!!

Wow!
Dose Max 2 have a thing for Fang?
Love how you dissed that guy!

OK I JUST WROTE A WHOLE REVIEW AND IT DIED! gr... i was responding to your last message cause i dont think i ever did... dang. i hate my memory. anyways. umm... i am insane! how'd you know?! lol. wait... your not stalking me right?! *thinks* dang i was joking but that'd be creepy. anyways i happily accept the clubs. they fit my life well.. and i dont think your a nerd for liking Yoda. then again i might be a nerd to... in that case NERDS UNITE!! lol. and you can now join my club of pyros! i'm like a cave man fascinated by fire. i love burning things!... on the fourth... anyways... i could never kill you! i love you too much! no homo. unless your a dude...? then it wouldn't be homo... but i'm not a creepy stalker... of you... you read nothing. and i dont know you, just to clarify. i think. O.O that'd be weird. and it doesnt turn me off! it takes more than that! it doesn't change my awesome opinion of you either! its just something that happened. and i LOVE EVIL DARK SIDE COOKIES! THANK YOU! and i know i'm a tad late but happy fourth of july. lol. i forgot to say that i think. well i hope you did have a fantabulous-awesome one. and now on to the story!

*hyperventilates* WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!?! MAX TWO! dun dun dun. *jaws music*(...that reminds me... my mom was reading a book about shark attacks on the jersey shore while sitting on a beach on the jersey shore... so weird)cant wait to read more! update soon son! just thought that'd be fun to say... it was... lol.

Wow!
How is the blond girl?
Please tell me!
When well Max see the flock again?
Please please please please tell me!

What the heck is this? Are you trying to ruin Maximum Ride? KEEP YOU PLOT IN ORDER! I STARTED A FAN FICTION CALLED ALITA RIDE AND ITS WAY BETTER THAN THIS AND IM A SHITTY WRITER!

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scary!!
Max II is bak!!
im guessin??
keep writin
x

wow just wow

that was not awful! you lied! liar! lol... bored. boredom explains a lot of my random ramblings... lol. random ramblings. that sounds weird...

I love this chapter but it is short again!
Update soon ok!

Really cool chapter but its short.
I want more!
Well Max and the flock see each other again?
This is killing me so please update soon!