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VampireGirl
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Incredibly well written, thought out, and very very exciting.
I am thoroughly enjoying this season, and am eagerly awaiting to get home and read the final chapter (I'm in a lesson and cannot read it now).
Angelholme
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
Wow. I am suitably impressed (again).
TechnoPagan77
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
OMG! That was so good! Thank you for doing this entire series! I have absolutely loved it! You are an awesome writer! Please keep up the good work!
bookworm33
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Thank you. I was getting worried about Joan with her "any means to the end" philosophy of late. I wonder how they're going to explain the Herald being blown up? It's not like they can just tack it onto the anti religion attacks.

I liked Joan inviting everyone to the victory party. It is such a Joan move.

Very good chapter, I enjoyed picturing all the action scenes. And why on earth do the villains start monologuing? It's a thing that brings them down over and over again.

I like how you've handled dealing respectfully with all the faiths in your season without denying Christ. It's a tricky balance indeed, one I don't think I could handle. As always it is a pleasure to read.
CharlesTheBold
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Very classy tying-up of the main plot, with the tense courtroom drama and the big scene where the Great Detective (in this case, Joan) rounds up the usual suspects plus her friends for the grand revelation.

I hoping that the finale involves Grace's waking up. God getting a little more involved than usual? But that's up to you. And there's the question of how Joan handles the way Ryan "outed" her during the confession. Dismiss him as a lunatic, or use that as an opportunity to finally reveal her secret to some of her friends?
SamoaPhoenix9
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Curses. Now we have to wait for season 4, unless you plan a final episode that will set up another story arc. There's too many loose ends to tie up!
At least if Ryan survived he won't be able to cause any more trouble in Arcadia. The evidence against him is too much. Boy, he did turn into a Bond villain, trying to take the hero down with him in one final blaze of glory. I will console myself for now with the idea that even if Joan does die, Joan of Arc also died a martyr's death. I can only hope that isn't the case here.
Wow, kudos to you for finishing this, and so quickly. I could never write this well so fast. It's been a pleasure keeping up with this series. I hope you write more!
kitiem3000
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Wow...
Never thought the big reveal would be in a building rigged to explode. Awesome
Elegos-Sirinial-Shamtul
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
wow. this is all coming together!

I can't believe it. For so long, i was convinced you'd bitten off more then you could chew with all these plot twists. But it's all come to a head so magnificiently, i'm astonished.

BTw, I will be reviewing the other episodes, as and when I have time.
androshay
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Great episode.

I love how seemingly inconsequential things from the whole season are coming into play here, such as Joan's enhanced fitness from Soccer possibly saving her from the collapsing building.

Looking forward to how it all gets resolved in the final episode.
hhargrove
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
WOW!

This has been a great story and I can't wait for the next installment.
Vartan-LoVer
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
I am in awe. You are an incredible writer Sandefur. The plot was incredibly well thought out and exectuted exquistitely. The whole Ryan/houseofcards/firework thing tied in perfectly and the entire episode was a long and winding road of brillance. I'm ecstatic that both Will and Luke are in the clear, but unfortunately with good always comes bad.

I think that you've truly connected with readers through the journey of Joan. We all know doing whats right is hard and sometimes not completely ethical, but its always tough to see happen. I also believe you've kept true to what the show is about, even though you added so much religious background. JoA was never about preaching to people, it was showing that doing what right is the best connection to God, and having faith in him. I don't believe in God at all, but i've still been enraptured in this season, and I eagerly await the last episode.
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