Very nice plot line- can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Dear Len Tsukimori THAT WAS INSANELY AWESOME. I had to reread the first chapter but I'm sure as hell happy that I did. I absolutely love the issue of the plot and Sasuke and Sakura's closeness. And Tenten? She just adds to the fire of an amazing story. I look forward to the next chapter. Great job and good luck.

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony

I wonder whats going to happen.

I absolutely LOVE this story! It's amazing! I really hope you continue it! :)

ANOTHER CHAAP PLEASE! NEXT CHAP ASAP! PLEASE I NEED IT! AWESOME CHAP! SHORT REVIEW CAUSE I HAVE TO DO HOMEWORK D:

ahh! this is more than great. holy cows. I was really not expecting that. wouldn't have thought of it.

fabulous! can't wait for more. an excellent job. :D

O, I am so goin to kill Orochimaru. UGH! I hate him. And what's with the rampaging people? UGH. So you mean Tenten's one of them? Er. Sigh. Anyway, I love the suspense and the whole Sasusaku thing. Keep it up! And update fast please :)) Thanks! :D

LOVE the story so far!Btw is there going to be a TentenXNeji?If you haven't already planned it, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE? *givespuppy-doglook* ** XP XD XD XD

that was extremely well written and the plot was just plain awesome! if you have the time, definitely continue please!

O.O

WOW.

update, please, please, please?

Ohmygosh! You update this! I love it. The overthrow and attack were from out of nowhere. And I've never liked Orochimaru as anything but the villain anyways. I can't wait to see how this all turns out; I haven't read anything Renaissance-ish in a long while, so I wonder how you'll do this.

Come on! Multichapter! More than three! That was all said very quietly...

Sweet. Stupid Orochimaru. He makes a mess out of everything. Gah. omg you have a BFF Jill too! XD Sorry, that was pretty bad of me. You make me laugh. Anyway, it was an interesting development, here. If you do decide to continue it, I look forward to seeing what direction you go. If you don't, it pretty much stands just how it is anyway. -WV

DUDE. YOU UPDATED. OH, I LOVE YOU.

:D

I love this story. Dang it. It makes me want more, more, more. Addiction, I say!

What I Loved:

-the description. It was so crisp and I could see it all happening. I just love your wording.

-Sasuke. I love your Sasuke.

-I like where this plot is going. There's tons of action. Building tension. SUSPENSE. (how long do you plan to keep us in the dark?)

"Her body was pale and eaten-away, her eyes sunken and hazy with delusion and terror."

That was beautiful. So was:

"So this is how easily a Queen is brought to her knees."

:) Very, very lovely. Like a reflection.

With a heavy heart, Sasuke bent to position his mouth by her ear.

Dude. Seriously. I cannot say how much I love your Sasuke.

"Sakura, who was his to protect, his to defend, his to cherish and watch over."

This was like, THE HOMERUN. Making me squeal and like happy and bounce with rainbows everywhere. You are a person who makes other people happy. NAMELY, ME.

So yeah. Now I'm cold and my fingers are frozen so I can't really type the way I want too and I have so much fricking homework and I hate - I'll stop.

Great chapter. :)

-zanibarr

This is awesome. I really love it. This chapter was even better than the first. Please update soon.