Just lovely. And very in character.

My only critism is the spacing - Larger lines breaks make it easier to read.

But still perfect. _

Really good! I loved Demons, and liked Mina's character. Please write more!

This is so good, I love your descriptions of poor Mina and her hidden helplessness. I really enjoyed it! Please write more!

yea! A Mina Fan-Fic I love Mina update soon!

what an amazing start I want more give me more!