Okay so, this review is late because Got sick and I've been totally swamped, but i finally got around to it! This was a really great chapter, you explained a lot so it cleared quite a few things up. I can't wait to see what Amy does. :)
-JoPo

Well done, please contineu

Perfect!! :) I like the little changes and additions you made. They're really really good! Just like what I had in mind. I just had to say this. ;)

Oh, yes, I think I'd like to read more from the book - I liked it very much. But if Amy now becomes "real"... I don't know whether it would make much sense. I guess it depends on the chapter(s) and on what happens (with Amy) in the chapter(s), whether it's better to keep passages from The Book or not.

hey this is really good, and i am insanely curious as to who the book is about...hm lol please update

I like this story, but it can get confusing at times. It seems like there are so many characters, so many different names, that I have to go back and re-read several sections. It just took me a lot longer to read than others this length.

Hey this story is awesome! I love it! It's a really cool idea, and it's written well! Also, I can't wait to read your one-shot in Rosemary's POV! That sounds great!

Good job, please contineu

okay so i don't want to be mean, so please don't take this the wrong way, but i think you could have done a little better with this chapter. i still love the story and everything, i just think you have more potential- wow i sound like a teacher or something- i can't wait to read more, i really want to know what andrew has been lying about. i'm glad steph is pregnant too. :) you most annoying fan...
-JoPo

I really really like this story! I love the idea of having a story in the story. That's totally great! <3
But I think you maybe should write who is speaking whenever you let somebody say something. Because some times during this chapter I wondered who was saying what and I had to reread some parts several times before I actually got it.
Apart from that, very good! A few grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing apocalypse-like. ;) You can still get the gist of what you're saying. But maybe you should get yourself a beta if you don't already have one? It always helps to have somebody read over what one has written - grammar/spelling-wise but also content-wise so that no big bloopers happen.
Anyway, love the story - I hope you continue it soon. ;)

Oh, and I first thought that maybe Lorelai is the author but then I thought it could also be that Amy-woman Elias Huntzberger mentioned and who I suppose is Katie's mother?

Okay so review first! great chapters, two in a row its like an early christmas. i really like both of them. this book reminds me of one i once had because i could never put it down. anyway great job.
on to the guess. i'm going with Amy.
i'd say more but i have to go help my father build our garage. yay...
-JoPo

Great Story...Your doing a fantastic job...Keep it up

great

REALLY GOOD! love this story and can't wait for more! update soon!!

sounds good. i like it and hope uou will continue it.try and update soon

I just found your story and it already has me hooked and I hope the next chapter is coming soon because I can't wait to find out who the author is and how this story will change their lives.