Beautiful story, I especially liked the last line. I feel so sorry for Minerva though... I liked the way you put occasional quotes from the first chapter of HP into the story.

Wow. That was really amazing! You are so talented. I can't wait to read more from you.

Really good! Though kind of weird but it was a real gripping story. I thought it was touching, especially because it came from the unlikeliest person out there, Minerva McGonagall (might of spell that wrong) Hope we hear more from you,

Ink

Plot bunny, eh?

Very nicely done-well-written, and well-thought-out. Curiously ambivalent about the idea of Minerva crushing on Lily-but it's a sweet idea.