 evil eye lver 2009-11-17 . chapter 17So awesome! I love your story! Please write more! =3 |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-11-09 . chapter 17D8 o...m...g... Oh my GAWD she did not just do that!! |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-11-08 . chapter 17Hm, short and simple, but funny none the less ^.^ Good job ^.^ |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-11-01 . chapter 16much better... |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-10-30 . chapter 16...those poor girls...oh my gawd...
~Akira-chan~ |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-10-30 . chapter 15*gasp* You didn't! *2x gasp* you did!!
Why exactly am I a vampire tho...?
And the fact that u got the personality and looks right is just funny. Hehehe...
Vampire...
~Akira-chan~
I rule this place!! |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-10-30 . chapter 14*face-palms* Honey, you seriously need to be a bit more creative. I can understand not wanting to make up MORE characters, but that's why you make them simple enemies, just to show off some skill. I didn't even read the fight scene because I know what these four can do and I was never to thrilled with their abilities. It's a tad bit boring when you see characters that were dead in the series. Kudos to you for the resurrection bit instead of they just lived, but seriously?
Plus, WORK ON YOUR GRAMMAR. It's a serious turn off when I'm sitting here correcting you through the whole story XP
*sighs* Ok, there's my rant for the night. *shakes head* Good luck with the next chapter...
Sasha |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-10-25 . chapter 14Hm... I wonder who let those ** back...hm? |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-10-24 . chapter 13A pretty good chapter. More details would be nice, but other than that, it was ok ^.^
Thank you,
Sasha |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-10-17 . chapter 13*sigh*...vampire twins...so immature...
Hehehe...masters... |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-09-20 . chapter 12I totally agree with her...being a vamp wild be awesome...
Ppl from SC &YYH: *nodd*
Update soon!! XD
~Akira-chan~ |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-09-19 . chapter 12Hmm, an interesting filler chapter... Definitly random... Aside form the ever constant gramatical errors, a pretty good chapter...
Thank you,
Sasha |
 yukisnowchan 2009-09-19 . chapter 12LOL brilliant! you, once again, got them bang on! thats just the way it is, Yuki does whatever Kirane tells him... great job! |
 Sasha Kitsune 2009-09-10 . chapter 11Woot ^.^ Pretty good, could use a bit of work, but still pretty good ^.^ Can't wait for the next chapter...
Thank you,
Sasha Kitsune |
 Angel of Randomosity 2009-09-10 . chapter 10That was...odd... |