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evil eye lver
2009-11-17 . chapter 17
So awesome! I love your story! Please write more! =3
Angel of Randomosity
2009-11-09 . chapter 17
D8 o...m...g... Oh my GAWD she did not just do that!!
Sasha Kitsune
2009-11-08 . chapter 17
Hm, short and simple, but funny none the less ^.^ Good job ^.^
Sasha Kitsune
2009-11-01 . chapter 16
much better...
Angel of Randomosity
2009-10-30 . chapter 16
...those poor girls...oh my gawd...

~Akira-chan~
Angel of Randomosity
2009-10-30 . chapter 15
*gasp* You didn't! *2x gasp* you did!!
Why exactly am I a vampire tho...?
And the fact that u got the personality and looks right is just funny. Hehehe...
Vampire...

~Akira-chan~
I rule this place!!
Sasha Kitsune
2009-10-30 . chapter 14
*face-palms* Honey, you seriously need to be a bit more creative. I can understand not wanting to make up MORE characters, but that's why you make them simple enemies, just to show off some skill. I didn't even read the fight scene because I know what these four can do and I was never to thrilled with their abilities. It's a tad bit boring when you see characters that were dead in the series. Kudos to you for the resurrection bit instead of they just lived, but seriously?

Plus, WORK ON YOUR GRAMMAR. It's a serious turn off when I'm sitting here correcting you through the whole story XP

*sighs* Ok, there's my rant for the night. *shakes head* Good luck with the next chapter...

Sasha
Angel of Randomosity
2009-10-25 . chapter 14
Hm... I wonder who let those ** back...hm?
Sasha Kitsune
2009-10-24 . chapter 13
A pretty good chapter. More details would be nice, but other than that, it was ok ^.^

Thank you,
Sasha
Angel of Randomosity
2009-10-17 . chapter 13
*sigh*...vampire twins...so immature...
Hehehe...masters...
Angel of Randomosity
2009-09-20 . chapter 12
I totally agree with her...being a vamp wild be awesome...

Ppl from SC &YYH: *nodd*

Update soon!! XD

~Akira-chan~
Sasha Kitsune
2009-09-19 . chapter 12
Hmm, an interesting filler chapter... Definitly random... Aside form the ever constant gramatical errors, a pretty good chapter...

Thank you,
Sasha
yukisnowchan
2009-09-19 . chapter 12
LOL brilliant! you, once again, got them bang on! thats just the way it is, Yuki does whatever Kirane tells him... great job!
Sasha Kitsune
2009-09-10 . chapter 11
Woot ^.^ Pretty good, could use a bit of work, but still pretty good ^.^ Can't wait for the next chapter...

Thank you,
Sasha Kitsune
Angel of Randomosity
2009-09-10 . chapter 10
That was...odd...
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