Hey just came across your story and think that it is really good.
Marcus and Blair are AWESOME!
Please update soon,
Kayla

There are no words to describe how much I love this outstanding story! I earnestly hope you update as soon as "real life" will allow you to!

Hey, still loving this story, can't wait for more! You are doing beautifully!!

i love this! can't wait for the next chap, keep it up!

"Is it possible for hybrids to be bipolar?" ROFL!! That's hot ;) Love this story. Can't wait for more of it!

It's like Christmas has come early with your recent update - thanks!

I think you've made a courageous shift with delving into the various characters' POVs in this chapter. I think the pace of the chapter was well maintained by the brevity of each character's POV segment swiftly moving into the next one.

I'll send you a PM with further comments on this chapter, as it's probably a bit too long for a review!

Loving the story and looking forward to what happens next...Marcus, please wake up! :D

It's great to see how devoted you are to your work to update chapters on time. This one was a good focus on Blair. Hope Marcus wakes up soon though ;-)

I have to say that this is the most fun I had reading a FF on this site in a very long time. I have been searching for something worth reading for a while and after I bought this movie on DVD, I started looking for a decent FF that felt the same way I do about Marcus staying alive and staying with Blair. Your writing is brilliant and your balance of romance and action is well versed. And I don't know why but your writing really does Sam Worthington justice... Cause I'm like his biggest fan, lol. Please do continue with this, I am absolutely hooked

Coninue! Continue! Continue! I'm itching to know what Marcus is going to be like when he wakes up! If there had been an alternate ending, then yours should have definitely been a choice because it's really a good plot and I reckon your characters are acting close to perfectly the same way as they did in the movie. I watched it in the cinemas twice because I couldn't get enough of Marcus :p so here I am again chanting...write more, write more! Great job

This is brilliant! I loved the two of them, especially together. The novelization of the book ended much better in my opinion. Both Marcus and Connor were alive though there was a neat twist. I highly recommend reading it if you haven't.

I truly enjoyed reading this. So much, in fact, that I stayed up until 1am reading this when I have to work in the morning.

You truly bring the characters alive and I love the game between Blair and Marcus. I hope you update again soon.

Wow...the conclusion of the chapter surprised me. Your reasoning is sound and plausible and considers the human part of Marcus tremendously well, especially his psyche. Thank you so much for updating. I love your story and can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Marcus wakes up soon. An exploration of the other characters' response to him being in a coma in the meantime would be great I think. I hope you're enjoying writing your story as much as we, your readers are enjoying reading it. Other than a few spelling errors along the way throughout the chapters, I don't have much to add in terms of areas of improvement needed. Thanks for writing and I hope you keep it up! :) I wait with great anticipation for your next update for this story...thanks!

Great chapter! As you've done throughout the story, I love the revealing of Marcus' uncertainties and the questioning of himself as a machine and man...it's fascinating. Xander is amusing and seems like a curious character. I'm not thrilled that he's so enthusiastic about performing tests on Marcus though...but the flip side is I suppose we will discover more about how Marcus works (physiologically/mechanically) at least?

Love Marcus and Blair together - you've written them honestly, which I appreciate. Volker is terribly annoying, but great for pitching the other characters against. Good chapter - thanks!

Hmm...not all smooth sailing...every drama needs some stirring! The perfect amount makes your readers uncomfortable, but not unbearably so - you've done it well. An introduction to some new characters - interesting and new, and definitely intriguing...I'm excited to see where this goes...

Oh, please do continue with the story and don't end it anytime soon...it's so good and I'm sure along with other readers, I'm enjoying it tremendously! There aren't many post-Terminator Salvation or Blair/Marcus stories out there, and yours is definitely one of the best!

I like how we're journeying with them, and how we're exploring and discovering the inner workings of Marcus. His character is fascinating and his relationship with Blair and the other characters is really interesting. I also like the humour that you've managed to include.