   That Gamer 9/13/10 . chapter 1UMMMMM... I couldn't picture it. At all. But, it was kinda good... Sorry, but you're the 1st one to get the TG COAL Approval. I'm really sorry. |
| Denvana 7/15/10 . chapter 1 Wow!
This is a great Jimmy/Heloise fic!
I can't wait to read more.
PLEASE UPDATE!
Denvana |
| educated-moron 5/7/10 . chapter 1 Aww man... Update! |
| Lacheetara 1/12/10 . chapter 1 BWAHAHHAHHAAHHA! I NOW HAVE AN ACCOUNT! NOW THERE'S NOTHING TO STOP ME FROM HOUNDING YOU UNTIL YOU UPDATE! |
| Calm-Waters 12/17/09 . chapter 1 OMG! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! This is REALLY good! :) LOVE IT! |
| pearlshipping girl 12/14/09 . chapter 1 This story is so gotta finihs it cause im dying to read IT OR ELSE.I KNOW WERE YOU LIVE! |
| RubyGloomRocks 8/26/09 . chapter 1 Awesome story!
Best JimmyXHeloise Story i've ever read!
Thanks for putting this up, its really great!
I really cant wait for you to put up the next chapter! |
| Naota Ketchum 7/31/09 . chapter 1 That was awe-smazing |
| blitzkreig42 7/12/09 . chapter 1 Awesome story. Love where its going. can u tell us when ur gonna update it |
| Hyper 4-chan 7/8/09 . chapter 1 awesome plz update soon |
| QKC 7/6/09 . chapter 1 OMG! THIS IS REALLY GOOD! Write more! I love the idea! Write more!
-Sam |
| fanfictionmakermachine 6/29/09 . chapter 1 Good. i love jimmy two shoes and i love that story please update soon |
| Ren Ichimoku fan1 6/29/09 . chapter 1 Heloise as a baby, hilarious, I love the plot and this chapter, please update soon. |
| Thelastgreatrocker18 6/19/09 . chapter 1 great story dude, please update soon. |
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