Feedback IS pretty, I must agree.
This was a quite entertaining oneshot. It really amplified the depth of Zuko and Mai's relationship. I also liked the comment about Sokka trying 'an assassination attempt or two'. That made me chuckle in thinking about how SOKKA would go about assassinating someone...
Anywho, great job, and I look forward to more. :D

I loved this ficlet! It was really cute and heartfelt. What made me laugh especially, though, was how you kept calling Momo a blob. I guess its just a funny word to describe him.

Your descriptions are excellent, and you keep the characters true to the canon beautifully. I especially enjoy your take on the aftermath of the series. I wish these were longer! Please write many more.

You say you watched the shows in Spanish. Is that your first language? If so, your work is all the more amazing!

Oh... I like. Poor Zuko, having to constantly rein in thoughts about the people his ancestors conquored.

Hm. Interesting. You have a way of getting into the minds of the characters in a way that no one else that I have read has, to date. Good job. Looking forward to more of this series.

-arizony-

Lol this was pretty good
lov how u showed how everyone treated him
hope u update