I loved this. Excellent. You can truly visualize how Mutt would be as he grew up. So like Marion with a sharp mouth, but really his father's son, caring adventurous and not afraid to risk himself for someone else. I loved this. Hope you do more.

Very well written, a joy to read.

A special delight to read. I loved budding mechanic Mutt and how he got kicked out of his posh school. Your touch with character development and wording is amazing. And kudos to you for showing Mation struggling with new motherhood (it's not all Kodak moments) as well as showing her falling in love with Henry Jones I.

Sweet. Really realistic and full of emotion. :) Great story. How about making another? :)