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armydude
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
I guess you san you say Cindy was "Hopping" mad
Jesse Lee
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Fun story, loved the Pig Latin, and James' typical teen reaction to nekkid bouncies. Keep up the good work.
keth1
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
I was laughing so hard, I almost bust a gut.

At less Bonnie was mature enough to get upset with James.

Unfortunely Cindy wasn't so forgiving.His going have to do a lot of "I'm sorry".First for the mistake and looking.Then saying "I didn't want to-!That's going cost him some bad points.

Those Stoppable men, his father kiss Bonnie years ago.And now his son has seen her nude.
aedan cameron
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Love the James and Cindy stories. The hilarity continues.
screaming phoenix
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
This was a delightful romp with two charming characters done in your usual magnificent style. I love Cindy and James! Those two can get in more trouble by accident than the whole school can intentionally.

Bonnie handled her clothing malfunction with the grace of the professional she is. While Cindy well, I’m sure James enjoyed the show; while it lasted.

As to the questions that No, No. and Yes answered. I think I know one and my mind is delightfully in the gutter contemplating the others.

Those word problems were priceless; and a pretty sneaky way of getting her tutors. Who knew that Bon-Bon would grow up to dismantle the intellectual food chain that Cindy and James dominate?

Of course Cindy and James are oblivious about their feelings for each other. They need their own little “So the Drama” to shake themselves out of the habit of thinking of each other as just friends and co-conspirators in general mayhem.

The ending was classic. Better watch out Kim and Ron. I’m pretty sure that’s what started this whole mess in the first place! I hope they get their rest and have a good reason for it too!
Captain IT
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Zorpox Jr. has arise.

Keep it Kp real

Captain IT
Mack53B
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
You Sir, are sick and evil. I laughed so hard my wife came in and thought I was ill. My diaphragm is so tender today. I could just visualize James' stunned look at his girl friend's bouncing body. Thank You.
King in Yellow
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Hate to be a curmudgeon, but I don't think it is friction that holds clothing together as much as the interweaving of fibers and seams which keep them from unraveling. So I wasn't expecting that. On the other hand, friction is absolutely vital to standing upright. (Think ice. There is friction on ice, but it has been reduced. If we have trouble walking on ice because of reduced friction no movement of any sort would be possible on a zero-friction surface). That was what I was expecting. Had anyone attempted to turn or move they would have fallen to the floor and been able to get up or move at all. (Swimming motions that would not have allowed them to go anywhere.)

KiY
JCS1966
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Oh, boy , hormones went into overdrive here?

Lov?" Classic.ed the whole incident. James' "first god look" at cindy may have started something otherf than the aforementioned hormones. "Ixnay on the ouncy-bay?" LOL!
Can't quite figure out the questions regarding Bonnie though...

Loved the principal's "blackmailing" of the kids to tutor. Maybe they won't be as bad as some of the parents.

Kim and Ron better be careful with their booyah-worthy activities, or they may have some splainin' to do...in a couple of months...LOL!

Hi-Larious stuff, Mr. Gray. Looking forward to the continuation of "Earth Day." when you get the chance.
spectre666
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Temptation, oh lord the temptation, and how good is James at resisting? :) He's at that hormonal hell phase after all. LOL, I take it Cindy has definitely taken after her mother. Bonnie has also grown, spotting the development of two unconscious intellectual snobs and nipping it. Very wise. question, I get the "yes", they're real, but what were the No, and no, questions? My mind is delving deeply into the gutter. :) Thanks for another hilarious one shot.
Spectre
bigherb81
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Very awsome job my friend another great one for the books. I think you may have mentioned it in a previous response or story that you were thinking of doing a Cindy and James story. After reading this one I think that would be awsome telling the in between stuff as it were. I've come to love these two characters I mean the crap they get into is classic. Great job once again on the story can't wait for the next one.

Also I know I've said this before and I know authors hate to hear this, but I hope you do finish some of your other stories. They're really good and most ended like right at the climax.
captainkodak1
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Drop Dead funny. Bouncing up and down? LOL. Mad hormones there. Love it. Love it.
CajunBear73
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Once again, the misadventures of James and Cindy make life so much more memorable at Middleton High. That gadget of James' resulted in so much hilarity reading the reactions of all parties in that lab.

Just loved the dawn breaking over James as some questions were answered about Bonnie, though I'm still trying to figure out the specific ones... But I think it opened a bigger book on Cindy that only time and getting over oblivion will help him check further into with his lifelong best friend...

So Kim and Shego may have become friendlier in their days of parenthood? I guess this could be the case if their oldest children are so close. And it seems that the 'rents have a better handle on what their children get themselves into then their own... I guess their experiences have made them more accepting of the whack their children bring to the table.

And now the scene closes upon some very booyah worthy activities of James' 'rents..

CB73
Sentinel103
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Charlie, and a "Ah-boo-yah" to you too. Is Kimbo and Shego still under the chips' influence or have they finally decidede to bury the hatchetts and not in each other either? Nice portrayal of Bonnie, James, Cindy, Ron and Kim. A good way to wake up this morning.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)
Mr. Wizard
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Funny. Funny. Funny.

And I always thought Bonnie would do well in such a task. Great job of not letting on what er, you know. These two kids are great.
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