I really like the story. However, I felt that the relationship transitioned from platonic to romantic much too quickly. I think that you could have added a bit more development between chapter 4 and 5.

Interesting. Though I think then end when Jess kissed Leslie was a bit rushed, but I still love this. Keep writin' :)

wow...i did NOT see that coming...

Oh, so cute! And no, I didn't think you rushed things. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yeah... you kinda rushed it a tad bit... but it was still all and all good. Keep writing! <3

i love this chapter.It really persuaded me to write bridge to theribithia

i think that you should write more carfully

So... I thought I already left a review for this... but I guess not =D. So, I like the story very much, and I can't wait to read more. Maybe try to make the chapters longer. Keep writing! <3

Very good story so far! Looking forward to more chapters!

Its a good start, but I think I like it so much because its almost the book set 5 years later, i guess that might come into play in a later chapter, but right I really don't see why its set that way.