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Carlisle's favorite patient
2009-08-17 . chapter 5
I like it so so so much!
please please please, update soon!
=D
Not-What-I-Seem
2009-08-01 . chapter 5
loved this chapter although i think you should have waited to marry bella and edward until esme was changed (just my opinion) keep up the great work.
xAshbellax
2009-07-30 . chapter 5
Hi there!

I knew it that Bella is a vampire! Anyway, keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter.

See ya'
lolalicecullenlmfao
2009-07-30 . chapter 5
i knew bella wasn't dead ;)
i love this story so much! keep it up! (:

love,
alice
JasperisMYeverything
2009-07-29 . chapter 5
:) I'm so glad you didn't actually kill Bella...although I ddin't think you could actually do that :) lol uhm...i found a nessie I like. I pmed her about mistakes...uhm...i didn't read very many Bella's. I got bored. I can do more later though. Anyway :) Love this story! I'll probably send you the next chapter of Another Chance to be beta'd soon so that you can do it before Julie gets here. haha anyway I can't wait for the next chapter!

love ya much
Ali
musycluver2011
2009-07-29 . chapter 5
aw happy/sad chapter!! i'm glad she's finally with them though, and its cool how basically everything is backwards, not sure WHY but it is haha
lolalicecullenlmfao
2009-07-14 . chapter 2
bella's not dead.
she's a vampire.
that's why her body was burnt and "unreconizable"
and she had a closed casket funeral.

you can't fool me (;

great story!
lolalicecullenlmfao
2009-07-14 . chapter 4
aw. poor esme. but it's okay. because she's with carlisle and she will be happy now (:

update soon please!
Not-What-I-Seem
2009-07-10 . chapter 4
love the story so far and i can't wait for more. plese update soon.
XOXO-SethsImprint-OXOX
2009-07-08 . chapter 4
I wouldnt care if her parents watched her jump they were part of the reason...
Obsessed.Otaku.of.America
2009-07-06 . chapter 4
...Damn...
ali :]
2009-07-05 . chapter 4
sad!! carlisle thinks that the i love wasnt for him :( i'm glad the sad is over! cant wait for the next chapter!! text me!
love ya
ali :)
musycluver2011
2009-07-05 . chapter 4
Ah such a cliffy! Can not wait for the next chapta!
-StitchedHeart-
2009-07-05 . chapter 4
Update soon. Hurry! I COMMAND THEE!! Okay, not really, but still. I had to try, right?

This is really good for a modern-based Carlilse/Esme story. Like, my favorite! Come on, you gotta update update update!
-StitchedHeart-
2009-07-03 . chapter 3
Twist? What twist?

OH, I WANT MORE! Hurry up and Update! Jeez...
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