 Adelaide.Jones 2009-09-12 . chapter 8i know i've read this before,and i dont remember if i left a comment or not,but this was amazing!it made me squeal lol,and i like how you put angela in there,i feel like,especially in the booth/brennan fanfictions,shes always painted badly,like shes just an annoying person whos kind of a bimbo,so i was happy to read this lol
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 Pha1ange5 2009-08-26 . chapter 16Hahaha! I loved it! :D
I too really enjoy the Booth and Max relationship and wish they would capitalize on it more.
I could totally see things happening this exact way between Booth and Brennan if the show would ever let them hook up normally. |
 Anne Nonymus 2009-08-22 . chapter 14This was really sweet and cute. I could even see how you could take his chap, tweek it a bit and make it it's own series with Angela setting up Brennan on a date she knew Brennan wouldn't like just to bug Booth and enlisting Sweets help in getting Booth to admit his irritation about it. They'd bicker and it would be Brennan who would dare Booth to date her. They have a great time but at the end he doesn't know how far to take the whole 'date exercise' and he leaves her after kissing her on the cheek. Because he didn't try to do more than that Brennan thinks that he thought of it as an exercise and Booth thinks she's not interested. Angela gets frustrated enough to throw them in an interrogation room and she and Sweets get them to admit what the date really meant to them.
Sorry, meant to send a short note but one can't help one's verbal discharge after consuming more than 3 red bulls.
Thanks
Anne |
 RowdyRomantic 2009-08-22 . chapter 14I love sweet and fluffy and you did a great job!
I LOVED THE LAST LINE... IT WAS PERFECT! |
 I'm Feeling Puckish 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Loved it & can't wait for more :) |
 ChoeBs 2009-08-22 . chapter 16OMG. I loved these chapters. All of them.
Just read them one after the other and I'm a pile of goo. If only some of your ides would make it into the real show, I could die happy. I am such a sucker for fluff. I can handle fluff any day, any time and just be so contect with it.
The last chapter, this line:
“It was like Christmas,” Max chuckled, stirring his coffee. “Booth turned three shades of green and Tempe turned bright red.”
Had me LOL. That was so funny.
Please continue these fluffy one shots. I utterly adored each and every one of them. I really, really liked the sweets orders them on a date one, and the one where Angela is trying to figure out if they are together or not and eventually finds them in Bren's office. Priceless.
This last chapter. WOW too.
Makes me think of the upcoming plumbing scene. I wish it will have the same 'resolution'. That would make me very happy. ;)
Well done and please continue. :) |
 AliMac 2009-08-22 . chapter 15gah! That stubble is something that definitely needs to make more appearances on the show! Glad to know that someone else finds it just as hot as me! :) |
 AliMac 2009-08-22 . chapter 11Just stumbled upon your writing and now I'm crying! This was very well written and thank you for making me laugh at the end with Parker's line! |
 boothandbones4ever 2009-08-22 . chapter 16That was great I feel so bad for all the guys out there that
have been caught. I'm glad I'm not a guy. |
 mendenbar 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Booth and Max are probably better suited for each other than Booth and Brennan, all things considered and sex being left out of the equation. They understand each other perfectly. |
 kinneygirl 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Booth and Max are good, they understand each other - this was cute |
 VENZwife 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Wow!! Loved it!! Max & Booth together is one of my favorite interactions too. I can't get enough of them! :-) |
 Chicklit 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Ha! Very fun. I can totally see Max behaving this way. |
 ariacle 2009-08-22 . chapter 16Well, Booth's killed people to save Tempe too, you know.
Loved this chapter, keep up the good work.
Ari
:) |
 Nyssa93 2009-08-22 . chapter 16uh-huh. XD I love the last statement :P |