Wow, i loved this to bits! I hope you do end up putting up a second chapter, though i wonder what it would be about? Either way, i enjoyed this. :)

Beautiful!

Aw cutefishes! I really like how Mello was like HOW THE HECK DID THIS HAPPEN? D: I say you should totally make this a doubleshot.

Hey, how did you know my favorite drink from Starbucks? :)

Holy...something or other, but this was simply gorgeous (like Mello's description of Matt's body...rowr). What beautiful imagery. So descriptive, I almost felt like a voyeur, it was just so real.

"All of it was Matt." Hell, yes. And the last lovely line just about made me cry.

And, how I love those "extra sentence-fregments." So very effective in conveying emotion, especially when one is experiencing an epiphany. LOVE THIS. Going in my favorites.

Wow, this is really good! Really sad but almost happy? So I guess bittersweet is a good word to use.

Definitely bittersweet.

Wow. This was pretty deep. All about Mello's thoughts; the hows and whys... there were even some subjects touched on that I'd have never thought of.

The way Mello described himself as a man, and what he considered was supposed to happen. You got it down perfectly. :)

You're such an amazing Mello!

I love this. It's different then your usual writings but the psychological effect was very moving. We got a great look into Mello's head (grin).

Thanks for the awesome read. You rock, as always. :)

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Beautiful!
-cries-
Its like poetry!
You have a real talent for writing!

Make me feel like such a noob.
I just posted my first chapter ever and...
-sighs-
You are amazing.
^^
Sorry if I scare some. Lol
Just had to say this stuff.

Please check out my stort "Tailed" and give me some tips.
It would be highly apprietiated...
Domo arigato.

♥ Me

I loved it !!

Good job portraying Mello's perspective. You did great on showing his character through your writing.

-Grave

This was very well written. I enjoyed it to the fullest. Keep up the great work you're doing. X3