very nice. i love how she managed getting that money so calmly and slyly. i love it.

I must say that I love how you give Bella wit, charm, and a spine where she is comfortable being who she is and not fitting in. I thought it was cute how Bella slyly got Edward to pay a million. Very clever indeed. I look forward to reading later chapters as usual!

Haha that was a cute little chapter=] Bella was hiliarous! She definitely played his sorry cheap rich butt! She's very clever but then again all of your Bella's usually end up that way which I love. So Are you continuing with story as more oneshots or just doing more one shots in another section?

Xoxo- Sendmeonmyway <3

Hello- I love your work... I always have and have probably read and reread everything you've written on FF. I'm not trying to be mean and I really hope I don't offend you but during Edward's human life- his eyes were green, not blue. Sorry- I just wanted to point out one tiny- itsty bitsy mistake in an otherwise awesome first one shot/ story.

So funny!!
Why did you make Edwarrd's eyes blue? They're green!!
Go on!! I loved it!

Guess it's a good thing she didn't reveal who she was? Yeh, wow she really is the kind of person who can be
'the fox can wiggle a nickel from a beggar'.
Gee to read how she did it was fun.
No wonder there are so many people in the world getting things done with other people's money.
interesting.
caww

Seems promising...it could be lots of fun! However, if you're wanting to stay true to character description, Edward is supposed to have green eyes as a human, just a tip.

i don't quite get the point of this , its good bt what is the point of the story?