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Cptlatnok
2009-09-05 . chapter 5
Your introducution of Alison as the tx doesn't make sense. Initally she was a cyborg type terminator like Marcus in t4 it seems. Then somehow you have put the polymemetic alloy over her mainly human flesh. This doesn't seem practical (well as practical as scifi goes). Also it doesn't explain why she is faster than anyother terminator or why she could ** up cw. Lastly the tx had onboard weaponry in her endoskeleton which Alison obviously doesn't. So to answer the question at the end of the last chapter, I guess I'm not a fan of the tx introduction.
As to the Cameron thing, I love jameron and it was a huge bummer to have her gone. I just don't see how she could be brought back, but if you can think of a way I'm all for it.
Ps
just thought of this, if Marcus was able to rip his chip out in t4 why can't alison? She still has a human brain correct?
Cptlatnok
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Honestly can't remember if I reviewed this or not already. Seems to be pretty good so far. One thing though, Savannah is a red head...
olischulu
2009-09-03 . chapter 5
(sorry for bad English) Cameron is gone. I can not believe yo have done this. She is the only thing in the whole TSCC that make the storys good/nice/fun/ or whatever. I hope you take the chance to bring her back.
The story itself isn“t so bad but without hope for John...
jojobevco
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
Good Story
fairedust
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
I thought it was too easy for Allison to begin with. Cromartie's plan made more sense.
mosherguy18
2009-07-05 . chapter 3
Good story, interesting take on the future without a General John Connor. Also interesting cross over with Terminator salvation with the terminator Allison. Hope you update soon.
fairedust
2009-06-24 . chapter 2
Intresting. Perhaps this is how we get Cameron in this time line. Cromartie already built her. This is gonna possibly drive Allison insane. Or maybe since she already died she will not want to be Allison anymore. I look forward to finding out.
Cptlatnok
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
Whoa!! Did NOT see that one comming! Interesting twist!
fairedust
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
I found this story intresting. Seems to have lots of potential. Having Savanna in the camp that found John was a very good detail. It certainly helps having someone who knows who he is to further him along. Just out of curiosity... why does everyone put Kyle in charge?! In the original he was only a sergent where as Derek was a lietenant. That never made much sense to me. But this being your story I can accept this detail.
djpc450
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
its a good start can't wait to read more
kaotic2
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Well that first chapter was a little weird. John jumps to the future... Then in the same chapter Alison is taken to skynet camp.

Is this going to be a John / Cameron story, or is John / Alison?
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