awww how sweet! :D i've subscribed ;)

i REALLY like this, especially the ending

That was a grat story, did you make it up, or did you get it off some ifo

maybe you can answer this for me, why is it considered indecent for her hair to be let down?

omg

so sweet

follows the story line greatly!

That's so sweet, I loved it!

if you would cut out the Japanese...or the try of using Japanese, it would be a very good and touching story!

Hmm that's a scary though, Chichi dried up and wrinkled in her old armor. Oh I'm so cruel.

I love Goku and Chichi. I've always wanted to see the ep where they fight in the tournament...but at least I read it in Chichi's diary. :)

Other than T/P, I think Goku and Chichi are the cutest couple! :)

That was really sweet and really kawaii!

I loved it! You showed the nice side of Chi-chi

and didn't make her out as a mean old woman.

*thumbs up* I truly enjoyed this story and I look forward to more. What did you mean by Goku's visit though? Is it when he's dead after Cell?

And boy is Goku naive! Great job, keep it up!

Ja ne!