 WolfDreamer25 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Umm good job but there are some inconsistencies here I believe. The biggest one is that she has a boyfriend. Not Charlie Thomas, and I don't know his name, but I am sure she has one. Claudia even commented once that he was cute. Secondly, I believe that Jaine does have one creative talent, but I can't remember what. She and Claudia had a fight about it in one of the books, can't remember which one however. Oh well, good writing. |