 Mary 2009-08-07 . chapter 2 Poor Trip, put through the wringer again. with several more chapters, I assume his recovery will not be swift. But he's our Fave, so don't bend ,fold or mutilate too much. |
 MrsTripTucker 2009-08-01 . chapter 9I do like the ending. I cant wait for your next story! |
 volley 2009-07-30 . chapter 9Classic ending! Well done! |
 lunaz 2009-07-30 . chapter 9 Great chapter. Liked the part where Archer found Trip and Malcolm in bed together and was teasing them but Trip turned the tables on him. Funny. Thank you for a great story. |
 Poohdog 2009-07-30 . chapter 9Ah, you couldn't resist Hoshi/Malcolm could you? Not to mention it would screw up your trend. I love your story! I think it was really well written. Love you too, wifey, lol. |
 Poohdog 2009-07-30 . chapter 8He, he, I like the line "you look pretty good for an almost dead guy." Go Jonathan! Another good chapter and I'm glad Trip's getting better. |
 Poohdog 2009-07-30 . chapter 7Poor Trip all stuck in a coma. Good chapter! |
 volley 2009-07-22 . chapter 8“I’m never alone with Malcolm Reed at my back. Keep your shirt on Loo-tenant.”
LOL - that was a great line! Very Trip-like.
Nice chapter, things are looking better, though - as you say - the emotional healing for something like this ought to be quite long...
I spotted a type, in case you want to correct it:
I’ve caught him on double ships twice - I'm pretty sure that should read 'double shifts'.
Looking forward to the conclusion |
 lunaz 2009-07-20 . chapter 8 Enjoy seeing how Trip, Archer and Malcolm relate with each other. Trip's progression to improved health nicely done. |
 MrsTripTucker 2009-07-19 . chapter 8I am once again going to have to say the same thing.
Good chapter.
They are all really good, so keep it up! |
 volley 2009-07-17 . chapter 7"He carried the plate, thinking of ways to hide it so he didn’t have to finish the food" - LOL!
I know he will pull through... :-) - we'd never kill our favourite Chief Engineer, would we?
Looking forward to more! |
 volley 2009-07-17 . chapter 6Oh no! Better get to the next chapter... |
 volley 2009-07-17 . chapter 5Sorry for the late review, was away for a couple of weeks.
Nice chapter. I think Malcolm's idea is a good one, and worthy of the good friend he is to Trip. It was also nice to see Müller make an appearance, LOL! |
 4Bluetiger 2009-07-17 . chapter 7Wow, they didn't hurt Trip enough, so they decided to put something in his heart? These were very bad people. Maybe now Trip can begin to recover at least physically. |
 RHMichaud 2009-07-16 . chapter 7OH MY, Poor Trip. And so much emotion from Malcolm and
Archer. Great story. Please update soon. |