 Ariana Elise 12/24/09 . chapter 1That was really good :)They were both very IC and I adored Dr. Cox's rant earlier on about the school girl crush. |
 xbluxmoonx 6/26/09 . chapter 1ahahah 3 this was so cute. :] |
 scones-better 6/22/09 . chapter 1Pretty interesting idea! I think you picked on something that was all nagging us and really give it shape!
I think your write pretty in character, as a general rule. I might say, that in my humble opinion, sometimes Perry's rent could be a bit sharper. They just need polishing at certain place to keep his rythm. Also i'm not sure he would be *that* patient with JD nor that he would have the time to watch a (almos) full episode in his break.
I liked the twist on it, it has a cute ending with a very in character JD reply :P |
 Sacred Fart 6/20/09 . chapter 1 Outstanding. You nailed the characterization. You did use the syllable elongation a tad too much though. Its a powerful tool, don't abuse it ;) |
 SamandDianefan10 6/19/09 . chapter 1I liked this. Well done! |
 andaere 6/18/09 . chapter 1LOL, this is hilarious. I haven't had a good laugh like this in days. :D You've really got the characters down - you're one of the few people who can pull off "Perry's Perspective". I love the idea; and again, you've got a really good grasp on the complex JD/Dr. Cox dynamic. I love the end where JD's like, "Coincidence? I think not!" xD |
 Bells of Tomorrow 6/18/09 . chapter 1This was great! You write them both so well, and wow - you really nailed Perry. From his way of thinking to his rants, I thought you did a really fantastic job. So many good lines in this too; all of which gave me a good laugh. :) Anyway, once again, great story! I really enjoyed the read. |
 HotCrossPigeon 6/18/09 . chapter 1Haha ;) that was awesome! Loved the nice fatherly bit towards the end and you got the characters down perfectly.
“Coincidence? I think not!” loved that line. Well done :D |