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Houkaru Kisaragi
2009-12-14 . chapter 8
interesting story. I hope Luciela isn't dead and Alicia and Beth come to play.
Mes-012
2009-12-02 . chapter 8
Aw, feel sorry for Luciela, trying so hard like that only to meet up with Teresa. Was kinda rooting for her all the way =)

I really liked the way you portrayed the Lion King guy, seemed to be pretty honorable.

Only uncomfortable bit for me was where Priscilla is the wife of Isley. Not sure if they're actually that in the manga/anime. Cause even though the witch doesn't give a very good example, i'd think that those mated or married would be more protective and jealous of other people hanging around their partner.

I can't wait until you update this or your Black Heart story. I really liked the way it has started.

~Cheers =)
Mes-012
2009-12-02 . chapter 6
Nice to see the 2 year time skip. And props to Naruto holding off Luciela's advances, says a lot about his resolve =)

Was kinda of sad to see that Naruto ran away, but i can understand how he felt. Am wondering who you put as the Hokage though. Danzo?

Oh, and really enjoyed the manhood reference. Very nice double meaning there lol. But i'm guessing that she wouldn't really mind if she cut it off, he can produce poles from anywhere from his body anyways lol.
Mes-012
2009-12-01 . chapter 4
Good to see that you know that Luciela came before Teresa =D

I was just wondering though, Naruto has the best overall youkai strength out of everyone known in this universe but cannot use it effectively, right? And before any buffs by demons/yoma, he's also the strongest in terms of normal strength?
Mes-012
2009-12-01 . chapter 1
I've seen this story in your profile for a long time, but never read it, because i didn't know a thing about Claymore. Got some free time this past few days and went up to onemanga, read to the most recent update, and was pretty much hooked on it. That and Naruto. So, lo and behold, i come back and decided try out this story.

I really like the current power level on Naruto, because now he won't get pwned by every Awakened/Claymore he meets. Also like the way Clare is done, glad that she isn't post-Teresa death yet =)

I hope that you continue this story sometime, because it's been great so far, though it's only been the first chap. =D
Pizzle D
2009-11-17 . chapter 8
I enjoyed this installment.
Well done.
scott pike
2009-10-28 . chapter 8
Liked the chapter. I hope you do a new chapter soon. What is Naruto's backstory and when will we learn it. I mean he isn't the current guy in the anime so what happened to him?
Uzumaki Crossover
2009-10-26 . chapter 8
this is awsome so far...please don't let it die
KitsuneOverlord
2009-10-24 . chapter 8
As far as crossovers go, this one is a gold nugget. It does help that I love both manga/anime they're based on... Naruto's an old goodie, and Claymore is just awesome.

And while I'm usually in favor of Riful over the other Abyssals, I like your Luciela. It's too bad she got so little screen time in canon...

Keep up the good work!
Gogolu
2009-10-23 . chapter 8
Nice to see update.

This story is very unique and interesting.
Dragonjek
2009-10-23 . chapter 8
I'm getting sad... I hate it when authors split up people who are in love.
gone119
2009-10-19 . chapter 8
Great chapter!
Hiroshima Namikaze
2009-10-17 . chapter 8
dude... thats harsh D: she could be dyin :\ and amnesia for priscilla... damn
ascalon
2009-10-16 . chapter 8
I can't believe someone made a great naruto-claymore crossover @_@
The characters are hardly OOC and the pacing is just right! ^^
keep up the good job
FRAME5
2009-10-13 . chapter 8
Cant wait for continue
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