Please update soon

I Love this!

Hm...I'm sensing an angry lemon. Sexy. ;)

come on alyssa hang in there

please please please write more, i'm like on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next

I love this story! Veck is a beautiful person ;D

Please continue, It's amazing!

Finally! I love that SOMEONE is finally acknowledging how amazingly sexy Veck is! :3

However, I DON'T love that your character is blond (no offense to blonds), tan, thin, athletic enough to run halfway across a mall...three times?, jump over the railing, and take a gun from a trained professional such as Veck.

Perhaps if you could go back, and do just a bit of editing, you could tone down the Mary-Sue vibe...

I really can't blame you for it, though, seeing as my first two stories are an abomination to fanfiction in general, lol Especially since there only SEVEN stories for PBMC (and they all suck even worse...sh! don't tell them that!).

However, (and my rant is about to end, I SWEAR!) I also LOVE your attitude and your writing style, and I would LOVE, LOVE, LOVE to beta this story, and your next one...(especially if there are Veck lemons in it!) 3

Love it continue

Bahahah he's definitely a cool guy! Yay I love it! And I am so happy people are finally acknowledging how hot Veck is!

I really like it! Please update it soon!

O I like it!

w00t. i like that boom boom pow, them chickens jockin my style, they try to copy my swagger, im on that next shit now. sorry that song is on the radio...anywho, lurve the story

Omigawsh.

This one is awesome. The suspense MADE me log on at...

...er...its 11:30 here.

I JUST WOKE UP SO THERE. XD

Please update. :D

ohh, steamy. love the story, veck is so hot! he's right up there with tom felton and orlando bloom, and dammit, alyssa is pretty awesome.

D

I come home to a chapter explosion! And a very steamy Chapter 6! Omigash, this has to be one of the best multichaptered PBMC fics! :P