BEAUTIFUL AND LOVELY AND ROMANTIC.

It's amazing... i've been greatly surprised by this story and it's one of my favourites now... it has everything i want.. and you transported my mind to a jazz club, i was there too. Thanks for sharing.

Love your work. This is one of my favorites. Every sentence brings their relationship to life.

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect! I love that song!

This is an amazing and beautiful fanfic! I loved reading it and the song choice was brilliant! well done! x

Ugh, I'm sorry this is late. I've been working 12 hours today :O Pleae forgive any typos, or spelling mistakes, or general randomeness :) Thank you for letting me read this first, and also, you're welcome for any ideas bouncing at any time :D This was brilliant! I really loved it, loved the concept, and also how you used present tense, as it added to the feel of immediacy and seizing the moment. I loved the pace and the ambience as well, the meeting of friends that becomes something more, and the sense of the change as well, the summer and then the rain, which is the feel of things changing for the better. I loved that Stella talked to Mac, and then he feels the same. Just a beautiful ending, I love the image you leave us with.

Beautiful.

short and sweet...just the way I like it. Great job!

aw that was cute! who sings that song? i like it! i love the story!! that should happen on the show!! ^.^

nice really romantic and nuce story line its really good you should keep in going

I love this song!! When I first saw the title I thought of the sitcom, "As Time Goes By." It's a British sitcom with Judi Dench and Geoffrey Palmer. Anyway loved this one-shot. It was cute how they both were making little moves while dancing and the rain at the end...great!

I love your story. So cute and so SMACKED!

Okay I'm officially in love with this story! It's so moving and touching and sweet. Gosh I just can't even comprehend my feelings right now. I'm a huge romantic and this was perfect for me. They were true to character and I could totally see this being played out!

Great job!

Beautiful, I say. Simply beautiful. I love the way you described the club in the begginning. I also think you did an amazing job of capturing the characters and their personalities. The dialogue between them was brillant. You're really good a writing the relationship between the two. Keep it up!

-Andie

I. Love. This.

The ebb and flow of your writing is so very very good!! And I do like the way this turned out. The description of the smells as they are dancing is my favourite; you know Mac smells good. (=