i really like this story its just really good you thought it through well and i think it would be great for you to continue it.

Are they are the Mall of America in Minnesota? It kinda sounds like it! :D I went there once - its a cool place. ^_^

Hm, that was cool how you threw Carlisle in there.

Aww. This chapter was so sad. I almost cried.

Aww poor William :( That sucks that she lost them both like that. At least she has Jazzy now, though...

It would be awesome if they found a surrogate mother to have their child, though would the eggs be able to develop in another's body when they've already been vampire-ized? Hm

I liked it... *cuddle* So you need to update. *sigh* You're going on my author alert now... *poke*

sweet! you mentioned the Sookie Stackhouse Series! awesome series, and cool beginning to what promises to be another triumph of your long list of great stories! i have loved everything you've written so far, you have a great talent! keep it up!

This is really cool! Keep it up!

I think you should continue. I'm curious of your theories on Alice's life before the institution. She was definitely old enough to be married and give birth so I like that you put that in.

Intriguing... great start. Update ASAP!

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Great story so far and Alice is actually from Biloxi, Mississippi sometime around 1901

Love it! of everything i have read i have read of alcies story yet! it is amazing keep writing i want more! lol