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Laurie43
2009-10-05 . chapter 11
Wow it indeed has been a long wait but i doesn't matter
An empty house..that is strange and mysterious
is the note from kuki and wally or someone else??
hope you update very very soon
stoplight-melody.
2009-10-04 . chapter 11
The entirety of the Sanban residence is gone...? That wasn't excepted, not in the slightest. I love twists in the plot.

-sigh- I wish I had your knack for writing suspense. And your characterization is still gorgeous.

I'm glad you've updated this, I was waiting for some of your wonderful Abby/Hoagie interactions!

...though I am not one to talk how long have I been spewing out diabetes inducing 3/4 fluff and denying any subtle 2/5 goodness? Bleh, I need to write a oneshot for them again, soon.


Loved it!

Kati.
TheNocturne
2009-08-20 . chapter 10
OH SNAP!

I didn't even realize this had been updated until today, and my heart rejoiced at the sight of a new chapter!

Seriously, though, I was so pleased to see the new chapter, and even happier when I was done reading it. You really have a knack for writing, and each person is SO in character. I'm insanely jealous.

Please, keep it up! You're so fantastic!
fictionlover94
2009-08-12 . chapter 10
Good chapter. I liked it. Kuki and Wally, and it's run by tommy. I love that, that was really clever, i wish i though of it. Can't wait to read more.
stoplight-melody.
2009-08-12 . chapter 10
A lovely update as per usual.
You finally gave a reason for the stealthy Wally! Woo!
Wally and Kuki made a whole organization together. That's a little surprising but, interesting.

I like it!

-Lullaby :)
Laurie43
2009-08-12 . chapter 10
They set the whole organisation up?! wow unexpected :O
few questions answered here so thanks for that
hope you update soon
stoplight-melody.
2009-08-01 . chapter 9
Sometimes short is good. Just look at Wally.
Anyway, be thankful you can actually write out a fight scene. I find some people just type the word 'punch' a few times and call it good.
Your writing is wonderful as always. I can't wait for an update and for your upcoming one-shot.

-Lullaby :)
TheNocturne
2009-07-31 . chapter 9
So after you gave me a review, I popped over to your page to see if you'd written any 2/5 stories, because to tell you the truth, I've never really read any 2/5 stories, at least not any that are FULLY about them.

And I was surprised to learn that I'm really enjoying this story! I'm glad to see that it's well-written, and that your grammar and spelling are excellent. You stay in character, as well, and it's refreshing!

I can't WAIT to see what happens next, I'm crazy excited to find out what's going on. I just keep hoping that Kuki and Wally haven't gone over to the dark side or something. I don't know. Anything could happen.

Thanks for writing something that has both quality and entertainment!
Alex aka Numbuh 145362
2009-07-29 . chapter 9
-Dies- The tension is so thick you can cut it with a knife! It was kinda short, but it was really good! Ugh! I got know whats going on! UPDATE! Hehe tubing is so much fun! My friends and i love doing it! :) Again, Update!
<3 Numbuh 145362
Laurie43
2009-07-28 . chapter 9
They lost!!
i somehow thought they would...wally is just a too good fighter
Poor kuki she feels so guilty... by the way, why did she wannt hoagie to knock her down?? Is it because she wanted it to be fair cause she knew is it was 2 against 1 abby would loose?
anyway update soon i am interested on what they got to say
fictionlover94
2009-07-28 . chapter 9
Good chapter. I love a good fighting scene. So wally and kuki are somewhat evil. good job on the chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Alex aka Numbuh 145362
2009-07-21 . chapter 8
Hehe! 2/5 roxmysox! Love the lil fluffiness! What the heck is KAW? Why do they want Hoagie and Abby? There is going to be a fight? Who will win? Please update and answer theses questions! -dies- I need answers!! Luv ya!
Numbuh 145362 (TND)
stoplight-melody.
2009-07-21 . chapter 8
...I'm confused a little bit but, I'm hoping the next chapters will ease that. Abby and Hoagie VS. Wally and Kuki, that would be interesting to see.

I adore the little 2/5 moment, very cute. And poor Kuki, I feel like giving her hug.

I seriously can't wait for your next update!

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Two Hoagie plushies and a Chowder one? I'm jealous.
Laurie43
2009-07-21 . chapter 8
I knew it!! it was waly who shot abby
what is KAW??
I sense a fight lies within the next chapter
can't wait for next chapter so please update soon

P.S a hoagie plushie sounds great!! man you are lucky
Laurie43
2009-07-21 . chapter 7
Kuki shot him?!?!
why did she do that??
well at least she wasn't happy about it so i can't hate her really (no one can hate her for too long)
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