Aw...didn't check this one out! But glad I did~

I like the brotherly love between the brothers and its just so cute~ And poor Keisuke...he's such a little boy and their parents just...well...seemed to me that their parents doesn't care about them, I mean in an affectionate manner, ne??

I fine Keisuke utterly cute when he mentions monsters and stuff, and his older brother sure looks out for him, huh?? I like that part about Ryousuke. Trying to be the big brother and not the 'butthead'!! *laughs* That was funny. Amidst the hurt and seriousness of the fic, there is after all some slight humour. Like that!

Hope you'll write more!

So cute!@

Wow. if this is what i'm up against, i think i switched to the wrong category. this was nothing short of perfect! the ambience, everything! and the length! my longest chapter in HTF was about 2,0 words! Wow, i need to totally redo my chapter. this was amazing, and i look forward to more of your work. 455/455

Little Takahashi's are so adorable. I love how the shades of who they will become are present in this story; Ryousuke's careful and calculating personality, Keisuke's rebellious attitude. You show what might be the progression into what we see in the manga. You also give an insight into how the strong bonds between them formed.

The writing gives a very childlike feel without being childish itself. The undeveloped insights of youth, together with a simplified thought structure, give off a very real sense of what part of their lives these boys are at. As I have read your other works, and know the sophistication of your writing, this feat is very impressive. It takes a strong and insightful writer to change their style to suit the tone of the story, and to add another layer to what is being told.

As always good work, and hopefully there will be more of these in the future.